Saturday, December 31, 2011

All I Want

All I want, is a smile,
To play on your lips,
Not just when I'm around,
But even, when I'm not,
And if the tears, feel hard to stop,
Place your hand, over your heart,
And know that I've been,
There all the while,
And even through the tears, you'll see,
Finding its way to your lips,
Is a tiny little...smile.

2 comments:

Preeta said...

Muse India Comments:

Simple and touching.

V Ramabrahmam, Pondicherry
Dec 07, 2011


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emoted genuinely. a young poem

rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai
Dec 07, 2011

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A beautiful poem...refreshing view...Warm regards..



Safiyyah, UK
Dec 05, 2011


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Preeta, Lively and refreshing. liked it. regards.



K Pankajam, Chennai
Dec 05, 2011


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Short verse, conveying a lot....thanks for sharing.



Hema Ravi, Chennai
Dec 05, 2011


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Sparkling fresh verses



Balram Cheruparambil, Abu Dhabi
Dec 04, 2011


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There is freshness in this charming poem. Beautifully written.



K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
Dec 04, 2011


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Rana Siddiqui said...

Lovely poem !